tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33824560.post1615390687467707934..comments2024-01-29T17:34:57.576-07:00Comments on A Blister to My Eye: Opening Section of Time and the SoldierDavidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08274485227373284224noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33824560.post-14249217920340087512007-08-23T18:05:00.000-06:002007-08-23T18:05:00.000-06:00The "h" does it for me - I'm now excited about rea...The "h" does it for me - I'm now excited about reading the full first chapter.Kristenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239497370370468057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33824560.post-22661259774715706832007-08-20T16:21:00.000-06:002007-08-20T16:21:00.000-06:00Okay, in all seriousness, now I really want to rea...Okay, in all seriousness, now I really want to read more.Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06286520897538327919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33824560.post-39920139823575385832007-08-20T12:17:00.000-06:002007-08-20T12:17:00.000-06:00Okay, okay. I didn't know if you guys were ready f...Okay, okay. I didn't know if you guys were ready for this. Here's the actual first paragraph. Hold tight! I hope you can handle this! If not, it's your own fault. Here it is:<BR/><BR/>The first blast came at dawn on February 8, 1945. Two men died in that instant. Everyone else was already dead.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08274485227373284224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33824560.post-32078197112367989452007-08-20T10:23:00.000-06:002007-08-20T10:23:00.000-06:00Wow! It grabbed me by the throat and shook! I must...Wow! It grabbed me by the throat and shook! I must have more. Please please please, tell me what happens next?alternatefishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02738065777302939097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33824560.post-67716173209939094132007-08-20T07:40:00.000-06:002007-08-20T07:40:00.000-06:00I don't know... I think it's going to be hard to g...I don't know... I think it's going to be hard to get folks to look at this, when it's so like many other submissions they see. You might want to try something a little flashier, to grab their attention. "BLAM! The..." perhaps?Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06286520897538327919noreply@blogger.com